Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Three Haiku Poems

Snowflakes like fairies
from a fissure in heaven
a fun flotilla

A daughter will fly
each generation is more
she is more than me

A son makes you smile
because now he is a man
his voice brings new joy

5 comments:

  1. Lovely. Do you share these with your children?

    If I don't get a chance to say it later, have a happy Thanksgiving.

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  2. That final stanza hit me with special force, given that I'm marveling over my two college-age sons as they come home for the holidays for the first time. My pride in them swells my chest so that I can barely breathe at certain moments.

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  3. That last Haiku made me stop to comment, too. My son turns 13 in two days, and I just can't express the love and pride I have for him. I love to see him turning into a kind-hearted, thougtful, young man.

    Great poetry!

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  5. 3 really nice haiku poems. The simplicity inspite of content is the nice thing about haiku
    haiku poems

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